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Read this and let me know what you guys think. I'm revising a story I've been writing for a while of Kadumo's childhood. I could use a bit of critique toom

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ArtsyOwlFree3 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2017  Student General Artist
Its a rather sad story but one some can relate to. I think it is going along quiet smoothly so far. I must say I was really surprised at the lack of grammer and punctuation errors.
You are definitely headed in the right direction, but I would live to see a little more description as to what they are. I noticed it said paw steps and I wondered what creature they were. Fox, dog, wolf, big cats, raccoons, etc.
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TestToBePossessed14 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! I'm pretty dyslexic so Grammer is a big problem with me. They're wolf-like creatures.
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ArtsyOwlFree3 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2017  Student General Artist
Ah. Well you are doing really good so far. I cant wait to read more!
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TestToBePossessed14 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll write the second page tomorrow after I finish some owed art.
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